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Simone

Simone's Poem

My sun rises in the blue, blue sky.
We played at school until it was time to go.
And all my love fell in my heart.

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At the risk of sounding nauseatingly sincere: awwwww. All the awwwww. It's wonderful that she has so much love in her heart.
That's just what I came here to say!
Wonderful. :)
Interesting! My kid distinguishes between "rhymes" and "poems"--the latter do not rhyme, in his schema. And, btw, he loves Simone's, as do I.
I haven't been rigorous in teaching "poems don't have to rhyme," but it occurs to me that "Poetry Speaks to Children" features several non-rhyming poems, so I guess it just sunk in. It'll be interesting to see if it changes later.
Aw, I completely love it.
Better than any poem I ever wrote.